The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham College.
“To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham’s enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate. Moreover, the average rent for an apartment in our town has risen in recent years. Consequently, students will find it increasingly difficult to afford off-campus housing. Finally, attractive new dormitories would make prospective students more likely to enroll at Buckingham.”
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Director of student housing at Buckingham College thinks that it is necessary to build new dormitories for students as the number enrollments will almost get doubled in next 50 years,Because of this it will make the space inadequate and according to him students will not be able to afford out of campus housing as average rent in Buckingham has risen in recent years and thus building new dormitories will result in more number of enrollments.But there are some questions regarding this which should be taken into consideration.<br> Director should consider the ratio/percentage of residents and non-residents because all enrolled students may not require housing as they may be local people who are living in the same city.So the focus should be on non-residents students who may be international students or students from another city or state.Because if they consider all students and build dormitories according to that number some dormitories may remain unoccupied and it can also affect budget of college so this concern is very important from budget point of view.<br> Another thing which should not be ignored is it may happen that a group of students may share a flat so even though the rent of that flat is not affordable individually,sharing will make it affordable.So this point also must be taken into consideration while taking decision regarding new dormitories.<br> Finally the director thinks that building attractive dormitories will result in increase in enrollments at Buckingham College.But here he is completely ignoring other factors which are responsible for the college to boost number of enrollments like quality of courses,professors ,campus placmenet scenario and many more which should be taken into consideration while concluding anything about increase or decrease in enrollments in college.<br> So to conclude there are many factors which decide housing priorities of students like residence,distance from home,sharing of a flat and there are some factors other than housing which affect enrollments.<br>
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 339 350
No. of Characters: 1728 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.097 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.805 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 67.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.143 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.577 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.577 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.277 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, regarding, so, thus, while, another thing, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 316.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60443037975 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84244853596 2.78398813304 138% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 19.7664670659 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 316.0 22.8473053892 1383% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 57.8364921388 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1771.0 119.503703932 1482% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 316.0 23.324526521 1355% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 5.70786347227 1419% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226170243388 0.218282227539 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226170243388 0.0743258471296 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0701772020484 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226170243388 0.128457276422 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.9 14.3799401198 1133% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -257.72 48.3550499002 -533% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.1628742515 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 127.7 12.197005988 1047% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.68 12.5979740519 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.71 8.32208582834 273% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 12.3882235529 476% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 128.4 11.1389221557 1153% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 128.0 11.9071856287 1075% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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