Some believe that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Modern life has become boring due to the steady pace of working or studying without any exciting activities. Whilst some argue that extreme sports motivates people and utterly alter their lifestyle and mood,others, in contrast, reckon that these hazardous sports ought to be stricktly prohibited, and I agree with the later view. In this essay both viewpoints will be discussed.
On the one hand, supporters of extreme sports think that the safety measures are utterly considered by professional organizers. These activities are organized only by specialized highly proficient trainers, and the adventurers will not be allowed to go for it without preliminary competency assessment. This could be observed in the rocketed numbers of skydivers in the last decade as per The Sky Diving Club in France. Hence, proponents defend their view by the official statistics and the strict applied safety precautions.
On the other hand, opponents find out that there are still a considerable risk margin. They believe that governments should prohibit all these life-threatening games. In addition to this, the commercial sponsores are encouraged to halt their advertising of such activities. For Instance, the renowned Red Bull energy drinks company financialy funds a plethora of clips and supports their promotion on both mass media and social media. Thus, official authorities should protect public people from the temptation of these videos and raise the awareness about the risks which may cost them their lives.
In conclusion,I am of the belief that such sports could be replaced by other safer alternatives. Therefore, if public authorities provide a safer alternative to such activities, this will save the lives of a lot of innocent individuals who are just seeking a new experience.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-02 | drabouyousif | 84 | view |
| 2019-08-22 | nenozamalek | 84 | view |
- Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? 84
- Your child is going on a school trip, overseas for 3 days. The headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. Mention:Why you would like to join the tripHow you can be helpful to others Ask some 67
- In many countries fast food becomes part of life It affects people s life style and diet as well Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion with relevant examples 54
- Your child is going on a school trip, overseas for 3 days. The headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. Mention:Why you would like to join the tripHow you can be helpful to others Ask some 56
- Some believe that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...some argue that extreme sports motivates people and utterly alter their lifestyle...
^^
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , others
...d utterly alter their lifestyle and mood,others, in contrast, reckon that these hazardo...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e hazardous sports ought to be stricktly prohibited, and I agree with the later v...
^^
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agree with the later view. In this essay both viewpoints will be discussed. ...
^^
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: Skydiving
...skydivers in the last decade as per The Sky Diving Club in France. Hence, proponents defen...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hand, opponents find out that there are still a considerable risk margin. They b...
^^
Line 11, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dition to this, the commercial sponsores are encouraged to halt their advertising...
^^
Line 11, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed Bull energy drinks company financialy funds a plethora of clips and supports t...
^^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ost them their lives. In conclusion,I am of the belief that such sports could...
^^
Line 15, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... who are just seeking a new experience.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47670250896 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95105084167 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652329749104 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1753951453 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197786972353 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604342190418 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501767491692 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108413353847 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338841393749 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.