Gone are the days,people were no appearance curious but now a days,a major section of society more fashion aware due to several reasons.the ever large number of beauty saloons testifies this statement. i also agree with this view.
The olden days people never bothered about being fashionable or cared about their appearance as the families were strict and were always focusing their children in either education if a boy and girl it either has to be working at home or getting married.
Firstly,the main reason is people during olden times were never much aware of appearance like be it clothes,make-up etc.But the present generation gets attracted by the advertisements given in t. v. or by some sort of media which convinces them to buy so that they look good among others.Like for example,a fairness advertisement is given by a big film star and though the person never bothers about his appearance it is the star who comes in the t. v. so he likes to buy it and he also asks everyone to buy among his friends so such kind of business tactics are used and fool people in buying products.
Secondly,one of the reason is being jealous seeing the other person dressed well and beautiful for example in an office if a lady employee has a good fashion sense and the rest of them feel jealous that they want to look more beautiful than her so they try to compete and appear more fashionable than her.One must understand that appearance doesn't makes a good person but a kind heart does.The main reason for the large chain of beauty saloons is everyone wants to look good than the other person they want to compare who is more beautiful.One more reason is also that currently people have become so much mad about showing their status just by showing their fashion sense and appearance by spending lot of money on saloons,shopping etc.In the end,all that goes vain is their money just by spending so much and conscious about body and good looks.Even the social media like for example a famous star purchases some nice brand shoes and posts it online people gets attracted to it and they start purchasing it without even thinking whether it is affordable and does it really useful for us other than showing people that you spent so much on them.
To sum up,i would agree that people should realize that looks and fashion are temporary and instead of spending so money on them better use them for a good cause which could help other people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, kind of, sort of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67435897436 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48497920122 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494871794872 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 351.403218856 49.4020404114 711% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.833333333 106.682146367 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125256141236 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629162567764 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314571702446 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771346776313 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161176319739 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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