The impact of Kelud Eruption
Kelud Mountain is located in Kediri, East Java. It is one of active Mountains in East Java. Last time it was erupted in 2007, and it was erupted left again on February 13th, 2014 at 09.30 P.M.
When Kelud Mountain was erupted situation became noisy because people were afraviid of thunder. In the night electric was also off. So, people felt screamed. Rain of the eruption ash was damaged aroun Kediri.
People living around Kelud Mountain have to be evacuated. Approximately radius 10 km from Kelud eruption was dangerous area to live. They living there have to be evacuated in save places. In other words, they came to Pare to make their live safety, because Pare is far from Kelud. One of places became relocation areas was mosque nex to Gilisuci Park.
The people living in other places such as Jogja, Solo, and others are disturbed because of the ash rain disturbed their view. Many airports was closed because they can not flight. Not only airport, but also pathway around Kelud were closed because of an obscure visibility to use transportation. In addition, the street has closed by the ash and made the street smooth.
Nowadays, Kelud Mountain has begun to be normal. The society has begun to do the activities again. Eventhough it has left many effects. That moment will be unforgettable for some people because the moment makes some people thankgiving to God.
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Approximately radius 10 km from Kelud eruption was dangerous area to live
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Sentence: The people living in other places such as Jogja, Solo, and others are disturbed because of the ash rain disturbed their view.
Sentence: The people living in other places such as Jogja, Solo, and others are disturbed because of the ash rain disturbing their view.
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