Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Students get limited hours to concentrate on study, because they are bound to work during study. As a result, they often continue study and work simultaneously. Students get forced to work due to high tuition and living cost mainly, but this problem can be minimized by giving free education and e-learning.
Two of the major causes of working during study might be excessive tuition cost and living expenses. Firstly, many universities offer courses, which are extremely costly to cover up. As a result, students work and study at the same time, resulting too much stress.For instance, students work about 20 hours per week to pay tuition fees of Australian universities. Another main causes could be living expenses, which lead students to work extremely hard. As students often stay away from their family during study, they might need to hire an entire apartment. So, the cost of living can lead students to work and study simultaneously. For example, students pay an average rent 300 pounds per week in United kingdom.
Two of the possible solutions of this could be free education and e-learning. First of all, government can offer free education to students by giving scholarships and grants. For instance, government of Sweden has made higher level education free for all students in many institutions. Another workable solution can be e-learning when online courses are offered to students. Many universities are offering online programs, which are affordable. Therefore, students even need not to travel to foreign countries. Hence, their living expenses will cut. For example, University of Warwick offers online MBA programs to students every year.
To sum up, though students often need to work while study because of paying tuition fees and living expenses, this problem can be diminished by giving free education and online programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2972972973 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71223824615 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510135135135 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7312618292 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5263157895 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219054467044 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07449858146 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491498174916 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153459329255 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00957594573128 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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