Countries around the world require more and more energy every year for domestic and industrial use. What are the causes of this excessive energy consumption, and how does it affect the environment
An increasing concern for many countries around the world is energy use. The causes of this phenomenon are varied and have led to numerous effects on the environment. This essay will outline the reasons why excessive energy consumption is occurring, and discuss the results it can have on the world.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why the increase in the consumption of energy is happening. The primary cause, without doubt, is the population explosion. For example, in 1900, the world population was estimated to be 1.6 billion, but today there are more than 7 billion people in the world. The more people there are, the higher the energy requirements will be. Another cause of the growth in energy use is industrialization and the technological revolution. For example, factories use large machines to do the jobs that people used to do, and modern households have a wide range of energy-consuming electronic devices, including mobile phones, water heaters, and washing machines.
Perhaps the most serious consequence that the increase in energy consumption has caused is global warming. The burning of fossil fuels leads to an increase in the levels of carbon emissions in the atmosphere, which causes the temperature of the atmosphere to rise. The result of this is rising sea levels, extreme weather, and desertification, which in turn leads to many species of fauna and flora losing their habitat, and being threatened with extinction.
One way to solve this issue would be for the governments all around the world to work together to reduce the burning of fossil fuels by investing in renewable energy. If we continue to sweep this problem under the carpet, future generations will need to deal with the consequences
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this issue would be for the governments all around the world to work together to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16197183099 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9190544349 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8883405226 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308059833824 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105571660051 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797060662782 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170463881158 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919683937464 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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