The line graph illustrates the amount of energy consumed in quadrillion units in the USA from 1980 with projections until 2030
The line graph illustrates the amount of energy consumed in quadrillion units in the USA from 1980 with projections until 2030.
As is observed from the chart petrol and oil have been consumed which are highest since 1980. While, the energy consumption from hydropower which is the lowest.
In 1980 about 35 quadrillion units which consuming from Petrol and Oil. This figure was nearly 7 times as much as compared to the amount of energy consumed from Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower. Besides, the proportion of energy from Coal and Natural Gas which stood at 17 and 20 Quadrillion units, respectively. About 25 years later, the amount of energy from Petrol and Oil increased significantly to 41 quadrillion units. While, the amount of energy from Coal and Natural Gas fluctuated around 22 quadrillion units. This situation was similarly to the energy produced from the other power which fluctuated around 5 quadrillion units.
In 2030, the amount of energy from Petrol and oil are predicted reach a peak of 48 quadrillion units. Similarly, the amount of coal energy will increase slightly to 32 quadrillion units. While, the natural gas will not change. This situation was similarly compared to Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... consumed which are highest since 1980. While, the energy consumption from hydropower...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rease slightly to 32 quadrillion units. While, the natural gas will not change. This ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77928048243 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0358323091 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3076923077 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471117097339 0.215688989381 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199609677765 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.24178534594 0.0843802449381 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.406284161555 0.15604864568 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.345961632982 0.0819641961636 422% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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