In your view, what qualities does a city need in order to be a great place to live?
In order for a city to be inhabitable, I personally believe that it should provide its residents with recreational facilities, community centers, and advanced and affordable transportation system. In this essay, I will elaborate on each of these points to have a better insight into the issue.
A city with plenty of recreational facilities will ease the people’s lives who live there in several ways. In other words, the availability of playgrounds or theme parks for children will contribute to their social and physical well-being. This, in turn, will pave the way for children to have the chance to get socialize with their peers and build better social skills starting from an earlier stage of their lives. By the same token, outdoor and indoor sports facilities are likely to provide adults with the opportunity to get rid of their everyday stress resulting from the hustle and bustle of modern life. A wide spectrum of sports facilities may also help them maintain better health while making most of their free time in an effective way.
Community centers, in a similar fashion, are of great importance in that they can offer many educational and social events for its settlers living in the vicinity. These events may range from free lectures and talks on a wide range of topics by venerable pundits in society to skills share opportunities as well as some social events such as live performances and monthly or yearly gatherings which will pave the way for somewhat strengthened communal ties.
Last but not least, an advanced and affordable transportation system will increase the quality of life to a considerable extent. Namely, maintenance of a fast, reliable, and safe public transportation in a city will bring a myriad of advantages from saving more time for activities to leading a healthier life into its residents’ lives. As for the accessibility issue, adjusting transportation fees based on the welfare of all residents from different strata of society and keeping them at a minimum level will also be equally important. The crux of the issue at this point is not only about the costs of travel within a city but also the convenience of accessing all remote corners of a city. To this end, the municipality should grant especially the elderly people and handicapped residents living in a specific city with effective transfer points.
Considering all these qualities that a city should have, I strongly hold the opinion that it will be the best place to lead one’s life. All in all, recreational sites, civic centres along with an inexpensive modern transportation system will make a city a great place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, while, as for, such as, as well as, in other words, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1625282167 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99586549511 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528216704289 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3458466316 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.9375 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6875 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14055984818 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522275967194 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518105209136 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903699644896 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531152580725 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.