Numbers of road accidents are increasing day by day. Automobile companies have ensured to have better safety measures. However,cases are on the rise.
Why is it so? Discuss.
The road accidents are augmenting day-to-day. Automobile industries have ensured to have good protection measures. Whereas,cases are on the increase. There are myriad reasons are stand will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, driving whilst tired or drunk is extremely dangerous. Some irresponsible drivers drink and drive,it is hazard for passengers. Furthermore, nowadays drivers are used mobile phones therefore mobile phones can be a dangerous distraction for drivers while driving. In addition,the uses of phones while driving has been banned in manifold nations. To cite an example,when driver received call so in that case accident chances are more.
Apart from this, automobile companies are improve the safety features. Such as air bag,speed-limiting sensor,fire safety and so on. Moreover, various kinds of features through drivers and customers both are safe. Additionally,governments give a speed limit and those people who have not emulate the speed limit. Hence,drivers are pay the fine. For instance, automobile companies are provide safety features, which is better for drivers.
In conclusion, life-saving safety features are mandatory in each vehicles and governments provide the law and regulations. As a result,it is the best way to driving for drivers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90155440415 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37725278863 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6094397486 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3529411765 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246143895486 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714153206297 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099016862985 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153134603231 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158132807414 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.39 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.76 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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