Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others, however, say that this world has little effects on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, many people support to take fast food, by this they were suffering from various health problems into their body, significantly strain which was calling a plethora of diseases. Hence, some are belive that by developing sports facilities, people could improve their health. but, It is not entirely straightforward. It can be also made against ideas. However, the following paragraphs will be discussing both sides and will be given my own opinion.
On the one hand, sports are a vital activity for the development of the human body. By increasing sports amenities, everyone can reach fitness of yourselves an engaging the sports activity at least twice of the week. As an example, such as swimming which is a most valuable and burning calory in our body speedily, consequently, we can keep our body fitness and strongly. Secondly, a human being can remove their stresses through sports. Everyone has been some stress and affliction.so if you adapting the sports games after working then clear off every problem in your mind. By these, we can develop public health in your region
In contrast, In a country, everyone can not involve sports activity then, not improved public health. The countryside has not any facilities even one sport. If build sports activity then their fundamental cost was almost high. In addition, It wants to gradually maintain for sports and wants to sport coachers who is an instructor of keeping healthy well. Therefore, developing gaming amenities was effected in a little part of society.
To sum up, this has many drawbacks and benefits. However. In my opinion, is developing sports facilities, can improve public health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, at least, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13553113553 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72629859848 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2276058639 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242753516394 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726973090513 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796162942888 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166436142541 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503845572415 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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