The chart below shows the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 and 2008.
The line graph gives information about the percentage of people who are unemployed and the number of people who left Ireland between 1988 and 2008.
Overall, the unemployment rate had a decreasing trend in the 1988-2008 period. Although the number of people leaving Ireland had a sharp decrease in the 1988-2002 period, the figure had a strong growth from 2002 to 2008.
The proportion of unemployed citizens increased to nearly 15% in 1992 after a decreasing trend from nearly 17% at the starting point to 11% in 1990 . However, the unemployment rate rapidly dropped to 5% in 2000 and increase slightly to 6% during the 2000-2008 period.
After fluctuations in the 1988 – 2002 period, the number of residents who left Ireland was approximately 25000 in 2002, compared to around 60000 at the starting point in 1988. In contrast, people in Ireland witnessed a rapid increasing trend of the number of people leaving the country to around 50000 in 2008.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...17% at the starting point to 11% in 1990 . However, the unemployment rate rapidly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00625 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72372819246 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5692856339 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41319099125 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204470352512 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838313899321 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259514258068 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754073686992 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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