Essay topics:
“Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to
the protection of national security.”
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| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-16 | claudia.lira12 | 50 | view |
| 2019-12-16 | claudia.lira12 | 50 | view |
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- People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they refrain from exercising it. 79
- “Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital tothe protection of national security.” 50
- “Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital tothe protection of national security.” 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- The following is from a recent email from the Diord Corp. Human Resources Manager: “Tobor Technologies found that mental health problems and mental illness were responsible for about 15 percent of employee sick days. Tobor amended its employee insurance 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Respecting civil laws is a obligation of both the population and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19822485207 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7690916872 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3163708208 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.133333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164316354274 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608004228078 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644627634627 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110405567369 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184517978889 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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