Many animals are being endangered by human activities both on land and in the sea. What actions can harm the existence of animals? What can be done to prevent this?
A lot of machines are capable of doing work which people tend to deal with due to growth of using and advancement in technology. Several advantages and disadvantages are emerged because of this providing employment with machines. one of the cons and pros will be listed below.
The first thing that should be mentioned is that a lot of big manufacturers are forcing to announce machine through the company trying to decrease human factor . companies are eager to establish new technology as market demands continuous process of production goods which is able only machinery. In addition labour of new-produced technology is enough high as well as cheap compared With humans. Diminishing cost of production may be one of triggers that supplants contribution of human. If is cheap, government and company will get benefits.
On the other hand,along with benefits, setbacks of this trend are enormous. unemployment rate is high enough still, and machinery may accelerate the current crisis dramatically.
In conclusion , all downturn need it's time. Introducing machinery in working place is not suitable when unemployment and crisis rate remained unstable
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...his providing employment with machines. one of the cons and pros will be listed bel...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'announcing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: announcing
... a lot of big manufacturers are forcing to announce machine through the company trying to d...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... company trying to decrease human factor . companies are eager to establish new te...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Companies
...mpany trying to decrease human factor . companies are eager to establish new technology a...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... goods which is able only machinery. In addition labour of new-produced technology is en...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , along
...y will get benefits. On the other hand,along with benefits, setbacks of this trend a...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unemployment
...s, setbacks of this trend are enormous. unemployment rate is high enough still, and machiner...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent crisis dramatically. In conclusion , all downturn need its time. Introducing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39226519337 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0346127522 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5996949248 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0730192627943 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259598718195 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351443520753 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0353285353599 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264483892965 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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