The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are variety ways for reaching to success in life. Some people believe that become graduate from the university or academic institute lonely cannot be guarantee for people’s achievement. In my opinion, Although these institutions will have positive impacts on person’s successful at the future, but they are not sufficient at all.
In order to become success in live, people should have be several factors such as, job satisfying, loving family, good relationship with other people, and earn money. In academic institutes individuals just learn one or two fields that are completely restriction and based on experiences in other nations that may do not have be efficiency in your country. In addition, you have to spend along time for learning whole live requirements in these organs. For these reasons, persons should look for other ways for reaching to success, such as, consult with the craftsman about job requirements, and study books related to own culture in order become familiar with the people’s characteristic.
However, we should accept this fact that, in some fields, such as earn a good salary in factory, or get a promotion, employer prefer to employ people that have been an academic education from university.
To sum up, albeit became graduate from university may assist to achievement in some aspects of life such as apply for a good job, but in my view it is not enough lonely at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ome success in live, people should have be several factors such as, job satisfying...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ship with other people, and earn money. In academic institutes individuals just le...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...s in other nations that may do not have be efficiency in your country. In addition...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...not have be efficiency in your country. In addition, you have to spend along time ...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
...country. In addition, you have to spend along time for learning whole live requirements in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21888412017 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87174177904 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613733905579 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9737880675 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.111111111 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183273196186 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811880557993 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370652905087 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984874494516 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672743556951 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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