tpo 24 the T.rex fossil still had actual tissue
The material discusses if the fossil of T.rex dinosaur still had a remaining of actual tissues or not. While the reading mentions that when the researchers broke T.rex's leg bone found that it still contains blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen matrix. However, the listening challenges all the points outlined in the reading passage.
First, the author states that the breaking fossil's leg has branching channels that probably where blood vessels were located, in addition to that it has soft materials which the remaining of actual blood vessels. On the contrary, the professor opposes this and points out that the branching channels could be something else, not blood vessels. The lecturer explains that after a long time of animal die, bacteria colonize an animal's bones and leaves traces behind. according to the lecture, the soft materials that were found inside the bone are just traces of organic materials that left from bacteria.
Second, the writer cites that the microscopic examination of the fossil's bone reveals that it has spheres that could be the remains of red blood cells. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes that and contends that researchers found identical spheres in other animals at the same place. The professor adds that some of these animals were primitive and did not have blood vessels. The speaker concludes that if these spheres found in animals that did not have blood vessels, so they could not represent blood vessels. The professor suggests that these spheres could be reddish minerals.
Third, the reading states that the dinosaur's leg bone still had a collagen matrix. Conversely, the lecturer contradicts this and posits that collagen could last for a hundred- thousand years, but T.rex fossil is seventy million years old. Thus, finding collagen in the fossil's leg contradicts how the collagen could last. Furthermore, the lecturer explains that collagen could come from a much recent source. He states that human skin has collagen, so the collagen in the fossil might come from the researchers' skin who handled the bone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...animals bones and leaves traces behind. according to the lecture, the soft materials that...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...they could not represent blood vessels. The professor suggests that these spheres c...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...searchers skin who handled the bone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, third, thus, while, in addition, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 12.0772626932 215% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 337.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17804154303 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39507605967 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480712166172 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1801528494 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.647058824 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507670207026 0.272083759551 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164104756868 0.0996497079465 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108250871494 0.0662205650399 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302353110432 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459126602064 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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