Discuss both sides of living regularly with laws or randomly without laws, then give your opinion.
Living without laws is impossible for many people, in the same time we have myriad people who wish
they could live randomly without living up to any laws, that is why the number of atheist become
increasing at a fast pace. The conflicts and arguments between both teams will be touched on as
follows:
The audience who pursue to preserve the Constitution has many arguments and irrefutable evidences.
For instance, they assume that if we call the laws off, the persecution, murder, torture and crime will
spread unrelentingly through communities. Furthermore, the robbers will get away with any things they
want , and no one can eliminate them. Moreover, the adolescents will be easily able to hang around,
hence, break the decorum among their societies down without any censuring.
Consequently, sadness, fright, corruption, and resentments will surely reign, people will not be able to
look after their children, but even after themselves. Also, famine, inflation, poverty and contamination
will threaten the life, as a result of running out of food , water and commodities. People will not manage
to enjoy their fundamental rights such as freedom and safety.
On the other hand, people who calls for the end of laws resort to some expedients to persuade the
people into giving in to their demands of absolute liberty. In fact, they just want to have and do what
they want without paying attention to other people’s feelings and perspectives. A very good example is that they
discredit the principles and the laws through women’s right and violence into constitution and religion’s
laws. Strangely, quite a few people give in their demands without any sufficient evidence, it just a bind
imitation.
Last but not least, from my perspective, the governments should cut off those agnostic and atheist
people into a far way-deserted island , show them up in a public square and warn the people that these
people are a serious danger in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...that is why the number of atheist become increasing at a fast pace. The conflicts...
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...ution, murder, torture and crime will spread unrelentingly through communities. Furt...
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...bbers will get away with any things they want , and no one can eliminate them. Mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 965.302439024 176% => OK
No of words: 320.0 196.424390244 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.309375 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86844402591 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 106.607317073 184% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 283.868780488 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4775057834 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.692307692 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 5.23603664747 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 3.83414634146 522% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 1.69756097561 1767% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13168397653 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447532863711 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541216060802 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383323129732 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536087981917 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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