Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this ?
What solutions can you suggest ?
Stress related problems are ubiquitous these days. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress related sicknesses including longer working hours and unhealthy life style. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including improving one’s work-life balance and diet
People are working longer hours than ever before. In addition, they also follow unhealthy life style. People place themselves under these unfavorable conditions because workforce is competitive domain. For example, some people aspire to climb the corporate ladder to gain high status and a high paying job. This often result in mental and physical suffering because they have to work overtime to take on additional roles which can be stressful. When people work for longer hours then they hardly get any time for physical fitness and due to this they invite obesity.
Maintaining a good work-life balance and improving one’s diet are both critical to mitigating stress related illnesses. People need to understand that if they live only for work, they will suffer either mentally or physically and a poor die will further exacerbate these issues. For example, many employees burn out from working too much and neglecting family, friends, exercise and hobbies as well as the food they eat. Therefore, in order to reduce work one must include a better ratio of work, rest.
In conclusion, in today’s fast paced world more and more people are becoming ill as a result of stress. They essay discussed how stress is often caused by long working hours and unhealthy life style. This essay also suggested that the solutions to this problem are twofold: to manage a better work life balance and eat a healthier diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25724637681 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4838773335 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.493880038 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112324576743 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047421880733 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454999681585 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905420358143 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638222066437 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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