The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The diagram demonstrates the production of an apple can.
From a simple recognition to the provided information, it is apparent that manufacturing process consists of 13 stages. Also, the main substance for these processes is obviously apple.
At the first stage in the production of apple can, all the apples are picked up from apple trees by hand. next, they are transported by trucks to be washed in the factory. they are distinguished by measuring their quality and then they are sorted at a cold temperature. the cold apples are measured by their weight and after that, they are peeled off.
The next step is slicing them and they are put in cans. apple cans are sealed and cooked to be sterilized. after these processes, all the cans are marked with labels and they are stored in factory. the last stage is that they are despatched to be distributed in markets and shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Next
...are picked up from apple trees by hand. next, they are transported by trucks to be w...
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Suggestion: They
... by trucks to be washed in the factory. they are distinguished by measuring their qu...
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Suggestion: The
... they are sorted at a cold temperature. the cold apples are measured by their weigh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apple
... slicing them and they are put in cans. apple cans are sealed and cooked to be steril...
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Suggestion: After
...are sealed and cooked to be sterilized. after these processes, all the cans are marke...
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Suggestion: The
... labels and they are stored in factory. the last stage is that they are despatched ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81699346405 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69944926927 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5295299799 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855516349386 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348772971014 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407476570385 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584527945241 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374660375098 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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