about a series step of products procedure

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about a series step of products procedure

the graph indicated the life cycle of a product which create a series of environment issues.

a product can be present in front of public needs to undergo a series of procedure that might bring bad effec towards the environment. first, plan and design the product in order to ensure that it can function well. second,consumption of materials and energy resources is being carried out to reduce the cost and upgrade its quality. third, production of product will be supervised by the leader to allow the process run effectively.

next, products will be packed and distributed to the clients then customers put them on sales for a period. recycling and disposal concurrently run out after the products had been used by the customers. as what as mentioned earlier, the recycled materials would then contributed to the first two steps to descend the costing.

in conclusion, products hat been done went through a variety set of works in order to make sure its best quality.

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a product which create a series of environment issues.
a product which creates a series of environment issues.

the recycled materials would then contributed to the first two steps to descend the costing.
the recycled materials would then be contributed to the first two steps to descend the costing.

products hat been done went through a variety set of works
products which have been done went through a variety set of works

Sentence: a product can be present in front of public needs to undergo a series of procedure that might bring bad effec towards
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