Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars
Why do you think this is happening?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Advanced technology has altered the way people do daily work. Artificial intelligence is now taking over the task of driving cars. This is due to the advance in technology, but rather in a negative way, as this reduces job opportunities.
Because of technological developments, artificial intelligence is used in cars.Technology has replaced lots of people's daily work to cut the amount of work people have to do each day. Technology is growing and is being used in many ways, including driving cars. A company that is working on driverless cars said that their goal is to minimized the work and stress of driving for people.
Using artificial intelligence in cars to replace driving is a negative change because it will decrease people's work, which may soon lead to an increase in the number of unemployed people. When artificial intelligence takes over the role of driving cars, drivers will lose their jobs because it is no longer necessary to have people driving. Companies can buy autonomous cars instead of hiring drivers and pay them salary. If driving vehicles can be done by artificial intelligence, then truck drivers, taxi drivers, drivers working for Uber will lose their jobs because drivers are no longer needed.
In conclusion, new technology has changed our life. In the future, we may do not have to drive cars as this work will be handled to artificial intelligence. However, this essay does not see this as a positive change, but rather a negative development because this could make lots of people, especially drivers lose their job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as this reduces job opportunities. Because of technological developments, a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Technology
...artificial intelligence is used in cars.Technology has replaced lots of peoples daily work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1976744186 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88336925838 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9268426721 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266865527649 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10455714075 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659538482965 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184746171435 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454248036266 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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