People have historically attempted to achieve a perfect society. However, it is difficult to decide what an ideal society would be like.
What would be the most important element of a perfect society?
What can normal people do to make society more perfect?
Having a health and ideal society was admire of all people as well as communities during the human race until now. I think there are several main factors for accessing to such society, and also people and government would do some activities in order to reach to this aim.
The first and the most important factor, in my view, for having perfect society is trying for world peace. Unfortunately, in recent years the number of political conflict between nations increase markedly in compared to the past. This events are threatening for peace world that lead to shortage of food, extent of an illness, and above all to die innocent people. For instance, in war between the Iran and Iraq almost ten thousand people have died and a lot of number of accommodation and infrastructures ruin just in the eight years. The second figure of ideal society is having a pleasant environment. Factors such as increase of pollution that have created by companies, creating waste by individuals, and also kill trees to make paper are the greatest threat to the environment which lead to flood and earthquake and may result in many families becoming homeless.
In order to attainment to such community all people and head of nations should effort together. Parents, for example, would prepare their children for future and teach them disadvantage of polluting environment and commit a crime. With doing this, at the future when they grow up we will see a safer world and cleaner environment. In addition, head of nations could with the respecting to the right of other countries and friendly communication with each other assist to make a safer world for themselves as well as next generation.
To summarize, definition of perfect society is the society which there is not any war, illness inside it, and exist a clean environment. For reaching to such community people specially parents and governments should effort a lot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'admired'.
Suggestion: admired
Having a health and ideal society was admire of all people as well as communities du...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...rease markedly in compared to the past. This events are threatening for peace world ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.015625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74271763038 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.619514013 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191007952776 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698360949454 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624385153771 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129081882758 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507187437532 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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