It has been said “Not everything learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion which source is more important? Why?
It is said that Experience is a strange teacher because Experience First takes a test of the learner and then teaches him. Books on the other hand first provide information and ask questions. I feel that knowledge gained from books and knowledge gained from experience are both important because only knowledge from a book does not teach us everything, gaining experience is also important.
Gaining knowledge from books is indeed less time consuming, but on the other hand, the things which we learn from experience gives us a life lesson. Most of the time as a student, we allowed taking the experience of only things which we learn from books. And maybe that is appropriate, because performing surgery without knowledge of it may dangerous. Experience is Good from learning a fact first from books.
Books are inspired to experience things. for example, cooking food, once I read how to make pancakes but only reading is not teach me how to make pancakes until I experience, is it? Sometimes our own experience gives us more knowledge from the things which I gained from books. And sometimes our own experience answers we searching in books. Both books and experience the best teacher for our lifetime. On the other hand, learn things from other's experiences is a different thing. Once a great person said, everyone in a world would be left blind and toothless. So, Learning experience from them may quite difficult. Additionally, Our own experience is always the best teacher.
Therefore, Gained knowledge from books and from experience both are essential . may learning from books is less time consuming but learning from experience is gives a life lesson. We can’t say only books are the best source or experience is the best teacher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion: taught
...o make pancakes but only reading is not teach me how to make pancakes until I experie...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
... left blind and toothless. So, Learning experience from them may quite difficult. Addition...
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: May
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02749140893 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72276212164 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443298969072 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8679730049 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376357324774 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136747626784 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116897653252 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276846181795 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349716598618 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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