Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
• explain what you are currently doing
• describe your suitability for this area of work
• say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in reference to the advertisement that I have read in the Times newspaper yesterday about your need of a waitress. I am working in a restaurant near my campus and I am happy with my schedule and my colleagues but the later one will close for a period of 6 months for a renovation reason and I need to find an alternative job to prevent any economic issues.
First of all, let me start with my major I am currently completing my degree in hotel management and I have already attended several training in food safety .Moreover I have a 5 years’ experience in this domain so I know very well how to serve people and help them in choosing their dishes .Adding to the already mentioned I am very friendly and I have an excellent communication skills and I am flexible on days and night duties.
Attached you can find a copy of my résumé along with my cover letter. I am available for a job interview at your convenience time except for Monday & Wednesday afternoon since I have classes at the university.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully
Rana Kandar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leting my degree in hotel management and I have already attended several training...
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun training seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some training'.
Suggestion: some training
...management and I have already attended several training in food safety .Moreover I have a 5 yea...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...attended several training in food safety .Moreover I have a 5 years' experien...
^^
Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...tended several training in food safety .Moreover I have a 5 years' experience in th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...tended several training in food safety .Moreover I have a 5 years' experience in th...
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Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I know very well how to serve people and help them in choosing their dishes .Addi...
^^^
Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and help them in choosing their dishes .Adding to the already mentioned I am ver...
^^
Line 9, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Adding
...d help them in choosing their dishes .Adding to the already mentioned I am very frie...
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Line 15, column 18, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...s at the university. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully Rana Ka...
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Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to hear from you. Yours faithfully Rana Kandar
^^^^
Line 19, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m you. Yours faithfully Rana Kandar
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, moreover, so, well, except for, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61691542289 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81606159757 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.642074519 44.8134815571 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.571428571 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201108173839 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978828288302 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379711167739 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119675628921 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700263775875 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.