Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries,
many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the
closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Small local marketers have lost competition against fast-growing supermarket businesses in some countries. It's considered by some that local communities are about to disappear because of this change. I completely not disagrees with the statement.In this essay I'll give reasons for my opinion as shopping in the supermarket is cheaper & provides a wider variety of products.
Firstly, choosing to buy from a supermarket to the detriment of a local shop may result in lower prices for many of the goods. The acquisition potential of a big retail company is significantly higher than what a local seller is able to produce; hence, the price can be negotiated in the customer's favors. For instance, tomatoes price in super market (Ideal Bazar) is lower than in the local daily and weekly market, which makes it affordable for many people.
Secondly, local producers are unable to provide variety compared to supermarket possibilities. When in the supermarket anyone can notice the diversity of products in general and several types of the same item in particular. As an example, it is a rarity to find two or three sorts of apples in the local market while for a supermarket is a usual practice to do so. As a result, people can pick in accordance to their needs or preferences, and furthermore, they are able to complete the shopping list from a single place, which is the supermarket.
In conclusion, switching from the local market to the area supermarket could eventually be a positive fact for the community, resulting in benefits such as smaller prices for the same product and quality, last but not least diversification.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09665427509 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04290309725 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2166783853 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0909090909 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245116472803 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104559513646 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771104226019 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145382619743 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625316875402 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.