Some observers say that police officers should be recruited from the communities where they work, so that they have local knowledge. Other people say that this is unnecessary, or even undesirable. Where do you stand on this debate? Is local knowledge essential in modern policing?
Every society needs an efficient, trustworthy police officers for ensuring better safety to the locality. It is observed by some that, Police ought to be recruited from the local communities because they have the potentiality to explore their local knowledge, and other people oppose the idea .Regarding police should be locally hired ,there is a case to be made on both sides of the debate.
After evaluation of observers thinking, Even if those people who support to recruit local officers they should be aware of that the local officers have to understand about the minutiae of the locality. Namely, A particular communities have certain frictions and grievance in political, religious or individual facts, and in such situation, police needs to show some sensitivity while they face the situation . Moreover, Locally recruited police officials get relevant evidence from the informant thus helps them not only informative but also proactive to handle crime and offences. Needless to say, locally employed police gets stronger evidence at trials, higher conviction rates and a deterrent to crime through sentencing, imprisonment, fines or community service .
On the other hand, Although officers from the community may in fact share some of the tendencies of the people, it is might be risky. For example, in countries such as Mexico, we see a high incidence of corruption among the local business and government community doing in front of the police. A second objection is that local sensitivity may lead to the police failing to enforce legislation and laws fully against the offenders. Finally, we must ascertain that police officers should have transferable skills, such as lateral thinking and investigative ability, and police are transcended their background or the environment in comparison with their personal interest.
To sum up, After comparing all sides of advantage and shortcomings against the debate, it seems to me that local knowledge is not absolutely essential for the police, whose skills should be effective in any context. Indeed, Had concern authority employed police on the basis of their transferable skills ,society might have get benefited through their sportive initiative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, thus, while, for example, in fact, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5261627907 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86946482708 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5111670993 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.416666667 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356094493968 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122125102862 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927497129353 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21606272084 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094904205379 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.