Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Global climate change, previously known as global warming, is an imminent threat to life on our planet earth. The colossal problems of pollution and urbanisation have been discussed over the last few decades and we have already begun to experience its consequences, one of them being extinction of plant and animal species.
A well-known example of such animal species is the white tiger. South Asia had a large population of white tigers about a century ago, but now only a few hundreds remain. There are similar statistics for birds and various plants throughout the world. Wildlife silently suffers owing to the manmade catastrophes. While this is a grave issue, there are numerous other challenges that mankind is facing every day.
One of those challenges is urbanisation, which is invading the wooded areas. Hence, animals have no place to live. They end up venturing in cities and that poses a threat to people and animals themselves. Another challenge is the rising water levels all over the globe. Ice, at the north and south poles, is melting away due to unprecedented heat causing the sea level to rise. This is leading to floods in the coast cities every year. Thousands of people are losing their lives, and the rest are left homeless due to the calamity. Recent wildfires in the USA, Amazonian jungles and Australia are also linked to the depleting ozone layer.
Loss of flora and fauna is one of the endless lists of tragedies that mankind faces today. I believe it is crucial that we start caring for our environment if we want to give our future generations a safe and happy planet to live.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57515144383 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647272727273 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4280210623 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9411764706 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804822381707 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019484278116 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206201302017 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475492367589 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192308262534 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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