The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map enumerates comparative about the office of AAA accountancy's main office which recently renovated. The first map has shown the old plan and the second map depicts the new plan.
As an overall assessment, it is explicitly observed that there were several changes have been taken in the office which has shown a staggering figure.
In the preliminary stages, the accounts room has been converted into a storage room. Surprisingly, the processing and new customer's office have removed instead of it where eight desks made. Astoundingly, two copies and fax machines removed and also fax and copy machines have been moved into the center of the office. The sofa replaced the storage and payroll office on the front side of the office while the lunch, meeting, manager's office have not any changes. The most string change is, they increased the size of the entrance and also arrange the seating facility for the customer. New office becomes more species and convenient for clients and employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...m. Surprisingly, the processing and new customers office have removed instead of it where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5594133855 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6296038737 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823327973572 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342417525299 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409726631546 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576633718153 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551773764218 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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