Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
The event such as traditional or religious festivals has a deep meaning and purpose. However, many people consider that the festive enthusiastic only want to have a happy moment without comprehending the meaning of the activity. I personally believe that the people are understood the meaning of this activity with the reason explained below.
First of all, the festival plays an essential role in society and people consider it as a legacy which should be preserved and passed to the next generations. The balinese people, for instance, inform the children at an early age the underlying meaning of the Nyepi event. thus, when the festival is held, all balinese unite together to perform the rituals, ceremonies and prayers whole-heartedly. Secondly, the government allocate much money on the conserving cultural heritage programs. they also establish the customary councils having the responsibilities to preserve the cultural activity and to ensure that the young people have a profound insight regarding this issue. thus, the sustainability of cultural or religious events can be maintained in the years to come.
Furthermore, one of the reasons for holding a festival is to celebrate and share the joyful moment. Take Eid Fitri celebration in Indonesia for instance, the people celebrate this event after a month fasting and they also reward their family with new clothes, define food and visiting the family house for sharing the happy moment.
To sum up, people are aware regarding the underlying meaning of the festival as they had been informed by their parents since an early age. Moreover, the government have a contribution to ensure that this tradition is long-lasting and the young people aware regarding the aim and essence of the traditional or religious festivals.family:"Arial Narrow",sans-serif">
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47719298246 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50995769438 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2224752629 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266424655709 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943435787796 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731078440197 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173607358646 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101441797552 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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