The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Some beileve that family members like uncle, aunts, grandparents etc. are important, others ' diasgree. I belive that these days extended family are no more important as were in the past for the following reasons mentioned below.
People were connected with agriculture in the past. Everybody in the family has to work on the field for the subsistence. For example, on the south Asian contries like Nepal people were more dependent on the agriculture. The house was considered to be independent if there were more family members. The grandfather would be the head of the family. Other members work together for food. However, these days small family are seen and they are more happy with it. Different families have different occupation and they can well maitain for their family. The agriculture can be done with the help of technolgy like tractors for ploughing with the small number of people.
Similarly, people these days are quite busy in their work. Let's take an example a son from the family goes to city for his garduate studies. He may find some girl whom he intend to marry. He then, starts his small family in the city. The importance of the extended family, nowadays is also decreased as some members go other palces in search of job. Moreover, the people can enjoy their freedom if they are away from the extended family. The grand son on the family no longer need to ask to make small decisions for father, grandparents and the cousins. Not only this, the small unextended family can make good weekend holidays more enjoyable as there will be only few members to be asked for whether others are going for the weekened holidays.
Moreover, whenever family members need to be connected these days, it is quite easy with the innovation of the technology. We can immediately talk to our parents and loved ones with the use of internet and social media. People in the past had to walk long distances to meet in the destination. But these days within few hours, we can travel across the world. Therefore, it is not necessary to live together with the big extended family just to be in touch with the members. This also caused to wane the importance of extended family today.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that extended family is less impothant now as they were in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 30.3222958057 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 398.0 270.72406181 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77638190955 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45018679243 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 145.348785872 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492462311558 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 419.366225166 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 13.0662251656 207% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2467444609 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4074074074 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7407407407 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51851851852 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187084146066 0.272083759551 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558748548108 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623220177951 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141573484404 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617214910117 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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