Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to buy a new technological device right away than to wait until others have adopted it.
Nowadays, new technological devices are invented faster than before. As new products are produced, lots of customers try to buy it and get information about them. Furthermore, some people may state that buying a new technological device right away is better than waiting until people have adopted it, while others argues that there are some disadvantages for this behavior. In my opinion, I suggest that people do not need to buy a new technological device right away, they can wait until others adopted it.
First of all, there are some problems may not appear yet until few months later, especially for some expensive devices. To illustrate, laptop is crucial for university students. When I were a student, I bought one Taiwanese brand laptop right away when it was invented. However, the battery of the laptop cannot be charged suddenly. I have to send the laptop back to the company and write the reason why they have to give me a new one for free. As a result. I regret about this and do not trust the first hand image anymore.
Second, the price of the new technological device is too fast to drop and be replaced by other products immediately. For example, my sister buys iPhone ten when it was first sold in the store. Compare with her, I buy the same device after one year but the price drop to half of the original one. Finally, people can wait and observe the device until the price is stable.
Third, people will share their previous experience of the device after few days and months. It is important for people to take a look about the reference. To be specific, as the new iPhone was invented, my best friend Amy who research on many different types of cellphone and device whether to buy it or not. It is an efficient way to observe the ability of the technological device and purchase the products economically.
Definitely, some people may state that buying a technological device right away can get the first-hand information. Nevertheless, it spends more money than waiting the price to drop for a while. To conclude, it is unnecessary to purchase the products right away but instead waiting others to adopt it is more reasonable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hey have to give me a new one for free. As a result. I regret about this and do no...
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Line 13, column 239, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ted, my best friend Amy who research on many different types of cellphone and device whether t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, while, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68638840577 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4087501296 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8181818182 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379428881573 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104469249352 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112108748141 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220415034529 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146897240034 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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