With a fast pace of modern life more and more people towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
The westernisation has led us to various changes in our day-to-day life and meals are a part of that change. The rate of increase of preference of fast food over homemade food depicted a huge difference between the current scenario from past. This dependency of people towards ready made food had shown a negative impact over our eating habits which has pour an adverse effect on our health. so in further paragraphs we will be discussing the same.
it is indisputable fact that people are so busy these days that they do not have time to cook by themselves and have a healthy lifestyle. Subsequently leading people towards wrong eating habits, having ready to eat food the convent option at that place. For an instance if we see mother's these days don't have time to cook for their own children and give them money which convinces a child to adapt to unhealthy lifestyle.
Father more food is considered to be the internal necessity of every individual, everyone needs food to sustain. Despite being understanding the importance of meals in our life people do avoid eating meals on the time which is associated to be with it. Unfortunately, makes an individual lethargic and obese. As during earlier days people were not depending on machines to cook their food neither they used to have these facilities as we have these days. we have plethora of restaurants at every corner. This availablity of food every where has changed the thinking level of one to not to work towards own cooked meals.
In conclusion, i totaly disagree to the fact that fast food outweigh the advatnages over homemade food as homemade food is far more nutriotuous then fast food .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85614035088 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67837645327 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4871406523 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246383446967 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749855294465 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640821670945 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157666554603 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621582183031 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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