The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The luxuries have people feel a sense of inferiority, thus, weakening people’s
ability. Furthermore, the more people use machinery, the more people come to
depend on machinery. However, the luxuries and conveniences could be helpful
to people’s modern life in various aspects such as saving time and displaying
individual abilities.
Admittedly, in case of people who have no economic ability, the luxury
products might bring about their ruin. Although the luxuries are one of the
indirect methods reflecting people’s ability and success, those who are not rich
enough to buy the high price goods should have no interest in the goods. The
addiction to luxurious goods makes people the slave of materialism. People are
apt to express themselves with those additional materialistic things rather than
with their own abilities. Luxuries doing harm to retaining humans’ capabilities may
not only regard themselves as unable and weak but also lose wills to improve
themselves. In this way, the luxuries make general people not so much
independent human beings as slaves to the luxuries.
In addition, too much dependence on conveniences can make human
abilities weak. In case of a calculator, although an electric calculator is a useful
tool, it is also true that calculators can diminish people’s basic numerical abilities
gradually by no longer using their brain. Today, the standards of literacy have
increased, whereas the standards of numeracy have decreased. Also,
in the event that people go to the nearest place by cars, cars can make them
weaker and cause both traffic congestion and global warming. Therefore, habitual
reliance on convenient implements would finally deprive people of their
independent ability to work out problems, even trivial ones with which they are
always faced in life.
On the other hand, the luxuries would sometimes be good methods to
express people’s individuality more clearly. Celebrities-movie and sports
stars-are willing to wear expensive clothes and to use the most expensive car in
order to show off their social status and success to the public more impressively
and strongly. For example, David Beckham, the British footballer, who made
about 48,200,000 dollars in 2008, flaunted his wealth by giving a
bag of about 200,000 dollars to Victoria Beckham. By wearing expensive dresses,
such actresses as Jessica Marie Alba, Angelina Jolie Voight, and Paris Whitney
Hilton appear on Oscar nights, thus helping enhance their reputation as well as
Oscar’s prestige. This example shows that the luxuries have advantages to make
people stronger.
Moreover, technological innovation has produced lots of conveniences that
develop human abilities. In the past, there were many limitations of the human
intellectual abilities without using mechanical instruments. However, nowadays
calculators help people solve numerical calculations in much shorter time with
great accuracy. Moreover, computer programs whose functions are designed for
various purposes can provide people with more compound abilities to solve all
kinds of jobs. Contemporary amenities also allow us to utilize our
high-level qualities more efficiently by saving us time and labor. The most obvious
example would be transportations. Owing to cars and planes, people can cover
broader area within rather quick time, thus making people more productive.
Furthermore, all kinds of home appliances have made modern women deal not
only with house chores but also with outside jobs. In this sense, showing their
great talents, people can become more independent.
In sum, although it is true to some extent that the negative effects of the luxuries
and conveniences produce serious damages such as reducing basic logical
thinking abilities and having a sense of inferiority, both in modern society can
allow some people to be independent and strong. If they would control both good
and bad influences of the luxuries and conveniences better, people could make
good individuals by using these two methods more effectively.
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also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3601.0 2235.4752809 161% => OK
No of words: 622.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78938906752 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99398916966 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91561380476 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 339.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54501607717 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 1077.3 704.065955056 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5635033291 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.033333333 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76666666667 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 54.0 4.97078651685 1086% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 80.0 7.80617977528 1025% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15029124275 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446817732001 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034913640884 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327890115294 0.150359130593 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320862292973 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 179.0 100.480337079 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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