The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total car sales in different regions from 2006 to 2010.
The diagram provides the information about the proportion of car selling produced in 4 different regions in the world between 2006 and 2010.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the total of asia’s manufactured car sale, while the selling of south American made car dropped significantly. Also, north America and Europe’s produced cars sales remained stable.
Rising from 30% in 2006 to about 34% in 2007, the trading of asia’s made car levelled off in 2008. In 2009, it slightly rose by 7%, finishing at around 20% higher than the initial year in 2010. In contrast, the selling of south America’s manufactured car was commenced at approximately 29% in 2006, remaining stable at around 23% from 2007 to 2009, dropping exponentially at around 10% in 2010.
In 2007, just above 10% of north American’s produced car was sold, stepping down by 3% to 6% between 2007 and 2009, ending the period at approximately 12%. Meanwhile, the selling of car built in Europe stood at the similar figure (30%) that of asia’s manufactured car in 2006, increasing to approximately 35% to 37% in the following 2 years, before dropping by 3% in the next year. Then, it accounted for 30% in the final year.
- When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. 67
- The charts below illustrate the average bed use in three typical hospitals internationally and the proportion of hospital budgets allocated to in patient care before and after day surgery was introduced in 2003 68
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the cours 61
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 11
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02130634049 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7941920174 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300629546779 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134056156275 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827070790917 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208416836725 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499058103102 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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