today more and more tourists are visiting placed where condition are difficult, such as sahara desserts or the antarctic
what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places.
It is observed nowadays that, a huge amount of people frequent to places which have extreme weather conditions. Tourists can learn about living in critical condition and can achieve adventurous experience by visiting such places but there are some drawbacks to be taken into account.
Firstly, one of the main advantages is that visitor can gain skills to live in extremely critical conditions in which there bodies are not used to survive. People can learn to survive with the minimal amount of resources and food materials available with them. This, in turn aids them to survive in draught condition at the time of natural calamities prevailing in the world.Secondly, it provides tourist with lifelong experience of adventure by visiting places with highest temperature situation. As some people are always willing to boost their adrenaline level, this is a great adventure for them. Such places with wishes temperature pushes the adrenaline rush in people who are ready to accept any challenges in their way.
On the other hand, the main drawback associated with people who frequent places with extreme conditions is danger of loosing their lives. This is because of the unknown danger associated with wild animals and habitat of that particular place. For instance, as per the recent survey around 45 % of tourist visiting antarctic have lost their life due to attack of wild animals. Furthermore, the another issue is that, there might be chances of catching some lifelong disease or disability. This is caught during the attempts of thriving to survive in negligible amount of material which are necessary for day to day living.
In conclusion, although visiting to places with higher weather condition can be beneficial from adventurous experience, it can leads to life threatening liability or even loosing once life due to the unaware about the wild habitats of the place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24671052632 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72037115889 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8502837582 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178119927349 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650339395862 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583560631793 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121798674629 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282718561476 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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