Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include:
What you bought
What the problem is
Why you want a refund
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a frequent customer and hold membership of your online store. I am writing to request you to refund the amount for my recent purchase from your website.
Allow me to elaborate; I purchased black color Dell laptop model number E4811 on 10th January for gift it to my friend on his 18th birthday. Unfortunately, I came to know that he recently bought a brand new laptop. Therefore, I believe this item would not be a suitable gift for him. Moreover, I cannot hold/pick this for myself because I already have Mac notebook and it is not useful for me either.
Furthermore, as mentioned on your company’s website terms and conditions and return policy, customers may return the item within 30 days of the purchase in case item is not opened yet and product is not damaged. As I am eligible for this return policy, I would like to return the item by mail. After the confirmation of the successful return, I hope your company will initiate a full refund at the earliest.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook and it is not useful for me either. Furthermore, as mentioned on your compan...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8449197861 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77922623894 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1492918826 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223216450328 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936325211699 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909971865216 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169312348861 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824110222489 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.