In almost all the coutries there are laws regulating the contents of films, videos, books and newspaper. Should the media be controlled in these ways? What are the benefits or risks of censorship?
Today, media is everywhere in every part of the world. It has many ways to meet people through books, newspaper, or by films and videos. Media meets us everyday through any mean. Media has a theory about itself which according you people is that media brings truth to be more visible in country.
Surely, gives us reality of a topic. Though media is benficial for us but it also damaging the society's well being in many ways i.e. most of the countries have given some laws to to control the power of media.
Media wants to know all of the information about a topic in order to come with a real ...
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- In almost all the coutries there are laws regulating the contents of films videos books and newspaper Should the media be controlled in these ways What are the benefits or risks of censorship 82
Sentence: Though media is benficial for us but it also damaging the society's well being in many ways i.e. most of the countries have given some laws to to control the power of media.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by an infinitival to
Suggestion: Refer to to and to
Sentence: Thus, benefits and risks both goes hand in hand in matters of laws given by many countries to control their media's power of freedom.
Description: The fragment both goes hand is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace goes with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: Though media is benficial for us but it also damaging the society's well being in many ways i.e. most of the countries have gi.e. some laws to to control the power of media.
Error: benficial Suggestion: beneficial
Sentence: Thus, media laws really worked in increasing media's popularity but it also helped in destorying young people's life who vanishes their bright future in industry line.
Error: destorying Suggestion: destroying
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Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
You need to better organize and focus on the main ideas of the essay. It makes us confusing after reading the essay.
for this essay topic, you need to use this pattern:
para 1: introduction. there are good and bad side of censorship.
para 2: good side of censorship.
para 3: bad side of censorship
para 4: your opinions.
Let us know if you don't get the point.
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1674 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.715 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.338 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.503 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.147 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5