You want to sell of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain why you are selling
Describe the furniture
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture
Dear Debbie,
Hope things are good with you!
I'm doing well and am delighted to say that I got a new job opportunity in Motreal as process design engineer for a Biotechnology firm, which I always longed for. The joining order was released and the date was around two months from now.
As, per the company requirements, I am expected to stay at the organization's quarters to support the production unit, in case if there is any emenrgency in off timings. so, I am relocationg myself completly to Monteal, and hence would like to sell a few of my furniture , which would be difficult if I carry along.
I remeber you mentioning about a plan to purchase a television a month ago, and so that came into my mind to propose you for a deal at a lower price. The television is a 32 inch , Plasma view curved model with built-in Dolby DTS sound system. it is purchased exactly 8 months ago , when the Phillips has ust launched it. it also has a USB port , where you can connect external drivers and can enjoy movies or music of your choice.
I suggest if you can plan a visit to have a direct view of the same. I assure we can arrive a decent rate less than 40 percent of the cost price. I suggest if you can schedule visit on 16th or 17th, as I will be leaving for a business trip on 18th and that will also leave me a few weeks to check for someone if you dont like it.
Please update me if your interested on the deal and let me know the time you plan to see the television. I will waiting to hear from you.
Warm regards,
Pavani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Debbie, Hope things are good wit...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Debbie, Hope things are good with you! Im do...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bbie, Hope things are good with you! Im doing well and am delighted to say t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
..., Hope things are good with you! Im doing well and am delighted to say tha...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are good with you! Im doing well and am delighted to say that I got a new job...
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Line 15, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...there is any emenrgency in off timings. so, I am relocationg myself completly to M...
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Line 15, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...would like to sell a few of my furniture , which would be difficult if I carry alo...
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Line 19, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lower price. The television is a 32 inch , Plasma view curved model with built-in ...
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Line 19, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...l with built-in Dolby DTS sound system. it is purchased exactly 8 months ago , whe...
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Line 19, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...em. it is purchased exactly 8 months ago , when the Phillips has ust launched it. ...
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Line 19, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... ust launched it. it also has a USB port , where you can connect external drivers ...
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Line 23, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...less than 40 percent of the cost price. I suggest if you can schedule visit on 16...
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Line 23, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...a few weeks to check for someone if you dont like it. Please update me if your ...
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Line 27, column 113, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'wait'
Suggestion: wait
... you plan to see the television. I will waiting to hear from you. Warm regards, ...
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Line 31, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng to hear from you. Warm regards, Pavani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 293.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32764505119 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45124320039 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2795109238 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5714285714 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246581446866 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760853884427 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070778674395 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121257894119 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790399841924 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.