You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item.Explain where and when you left itSay what action you would like the company to take write at least 150 words.

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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item.

Explain where and when you left it

Say what action you would like the company to take write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir / Madam,

My name is Ahmed Karem, and I am a frequent traveller on your trains. I would like to inform you about the loss of my bag on one of the trains, which is a valuable gift from my father.

On Thursday the 15th of January on train number 55 route B, heading from Cairo to Alexandria at 9:50. While heading to work, I had a phone call which distracted me; I probably left the bag on seat number 45C. It is a black leather bag with a silver belt, it holds my personal laptop, and my wallet which includes my credit card and valuable items.

I would be grateful, if you could help me to find my bag by taking the required action in such cases. I also request to contact the railway staff, who were on duty during that time; moreover, hanging a notice with the bag’s descriptions would be useful.

I am looking forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your anticipated support. Should there be any queries, please contact me on 95782521 or via mail: ahmedkarem55@gmail.com.

Faithfully yours,

Ahmed Karem

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...s. I would be grateful, if you could help me to find my bag by taking the required action in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...apos;s descriptions would be useful. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72851734203 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1101269686 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128847827002 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513134813081 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553851072918 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837505611102 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323896152425 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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