Many people try to look younger than their age. What are reasons people do this? Do think this is a good thing or bad thing?
many people think that looking younger makes them more confident and increases their self-esteem. Although this is great for the individual but it creates an artificial consumer demand in people and their behavior becomes more materialistic.
Human beings like feeling the best they can be and this is usually during their 20s. hence, most middle-aged men and women often try to dress up to make themselves visually attractive. In addition to approval from others, they might also be affected internally since now they are more likely to be confident.
On another note, these trend of trying to impress others initiates people to buy more and more. Their consumer and materialistic needs increases and this might cause them to always want too many things since fashion changes quickly and is often outdated within a short period of time. For example, some individuals spend 70% if their money on clothes and accessories.
However, despite the negatives of following trend and trying to look different, there are certain aspects which motivates a person to do this. First of all, it enables the person to believe in their own physical shape and also take care of themselves. Furthermore, they also like to take care of their own health, both physically and mentally. Lastly, everyone feels the best vibes from all who look young and beautiful.
Overall, looking young has both advantages and disadvantages. The benefits far outweigh the negative side and hence I am of the opinion that if someone wants to look young, then this is for the betterment of their ownselves and everyone around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, look, so, then, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13688212928 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62443364992 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8902819914 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270644190208 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081753816448 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637866324764 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138116726684 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625662825247 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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