Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
each provision comes with a numerous pros and cons . globalisation is one such area of debate, where people suffer due to it, but at the same time it promotes growth .
the policies of globalisation, privatisation and liberalisation came in India around 90's which majorly impacted India's economy .
growth of multinational companies have provided various jobs opportunities along with betterment in the lifestyle of people . collaboration with their companies have promoted the increment inhuman efficiency and effectiveness as these kind of Companies provide training and development India campus.
Globalisation has open Gates for export which caters to diversity of needs around the world. India has also seen a major boon in economy as globalisation has nutured its GDP.
However, globalisation of India's market has also hampered its sustainability and has been promoting 'Made in China' or 'Made in USA' products known to be the capital of land, it is hence not being able to utilise its resources mindfully. Despite of having such a vast variety of culture which gives rise to diversity of resources, India is lagging behind in the race.Therefore, Made in India needs to be promoted despite of selling other countries made items.
All in all globalisation is one policy that has white side attached to a black one ,from providing plethora of job opportunities along with nurturing the human competency it also acts as a hindering factor in India's growth as a country Globalisation has also indirectly question the integrity of our country as it might note to some people that we as a country a not capable enough to be self sustainable.
I would like to mention that do always globalisation has to the GDP which eventually leads to development of a country which should be the priority
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23367697595 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14697156785 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3556661549 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961418767659 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423570845253 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037134012535 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048661853391 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408568529127 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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