In some countries,it is now possible for people to buy a wide variety of foods transported from all over the world. To what extent the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks?
In few nations, it is currently fedsible for individual to purchase of broad diversity of foodstuffs transported from all over the globe. Their are both pros and cons for this situation. However, other countries food products available in own nation is advantages for the individuals.
Discussing the advantage, food product variation are deliver all over the world. First and foremost, other countries food should be beneficial for consumer. This is because, other Nation some food stuffs ought to be helpful for the health, but that product are not available in our the nation and our citizen can not take their advantage. Furthermore, consumer are always by their budget edibles. For example India's consumer are purchase cheapest food product from China and it is a good for the Indian buyers. Moreover, this development has positive influence on both export and import countries. The reason being produse a huge number product. However, the demand of labours went up considerably. Lastly, there will be more jobs and the unemployment will reduse. In other words, it will help bring this nation out of pressure.
On the contrary, there are some drawbacks too. To initiate with, nutrition which is transported from other countries maybe not fresh and unsafe. Due to the fact it takes a long time in transportation and stops. Additionally, when the other countries food comes in our nation, then the our country product value would be down and it will be not not a good for nation. A good example for this the maggi foodstuffs was come from other country. After, Our patanjali maggi company value should be down.
To conclude, there are few demerits such as nourishment which is transfer from aboard may be not healthy, but there are many diversity of food from more countries is beneficial for consumer too. However, my argument prove that advantages of this situation are more than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, lastly, may, moreover, so, then, for example, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11821086262 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71891178509 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517571884984 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.599543289 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2857142857 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9047619048 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210497854644 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681213263623 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517076079525 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141822549589 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362620827008 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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