Creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
According to the prompt, creativity should be considered as the only correct parameter to judge a person's intelligence. I disagree with the statement provided and believe that although, creativity is a very important aspect while judging one's intellect, other important factors shouldn't be neglected.
A creative mind is a home to revolutionary ideas. In other words, a person with unorthodox thinking has the ability to come up with ideas which can change the world in a meaningful way. For example, Thomas Edison, who was a very mediocre student in school, had a very creative mind. Edison had over a 1000 patents under his name and is considered probably one of the most revered inventors in the 20th century. Even though a person might not be good at studies, he might have very heterodox thinking which makes him different and intelligent in his own way.
Another example can be of Steve Jobs, who was the founder and CEO of Apple Inc. He had no prior coding experience, but had a clear vision in his mind. Due to that reason, he was able to create one of the biggest brand in Technology.
However, creativity should not be the only criteria to measure intelligence of a person. People are not always gifted with a creative mind, but they compensate for it with their hard-work and diligence. For instance, the CEO of Alphabet inc, Sundar Pichai, is one person who rose up in ranks due to his consistent hard-work, and eventually became the CEO of alphabet inc., the parent company of Google. When judging a person's cognitive abilities, one should not only take into account his creative thinking, but should also consider other qualities.
Intelligence is the ability to acquire knowledge and use that knowledge in an effective manner. It is not always about devising a new idea. For instance, consider an example of a dancer and a surgeon. A dancer is known for his creativity, while the surgeon is known for his finesse in performing a surgery. A surgeon doesn't need to be creative in doing his work. But this doesn't mean that the surgeon is less intelligent than the dancer. A surgeon is intelligent in his own way and is very good at performing his own job even if he is less creative than the dancer.
Hence, creativity, although, a very important aspect in judging one's cognitive ability, is not the only parameter to judge one's intelligence. Intelligence is a combination of various qualities and is not as uni-dimensional as the statements claims it to be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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...p with ideas which can change the world in a meaningful way. For example, Thomas Edison, who was a ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85849056604 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83827069302 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474056603774 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9597150638 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5652173913 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4347826087 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163703245747 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536013490715 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549281565319 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939280266547 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466301011904 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.