In your opinion, why is the circus still a popular form of entertainment in the modern electronic age?Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In your opinion, why is the circus still a popular form of entertainment in the modern electronic age?

Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Submitted by busraydmr on Thu, 01/30/2020 - 10:18

These days, even though, due to technology, people have many activities which are entertaining and grandeur like watching 5-dimension films, some people prefer to go to circuses for amusement. The main reason of going to the circus is feelings of the venue where circus is in. As well as there are funny clowns, jesters and jugglers, in the same time we can see trained animals which are exotic, such as elephants, tigers, monkeys etc.

I think, the most attractive reason of the circus is that, compared with electronics we are used to, everything of in there are alive, unusual and exotic. We always do not see clowns wear funny clothes, acrobats have interesting stunts or we do not see exotic animals like a tiger which is not a threat for people, especially children. It is clear that all of things in a circus are interesting things we want to see in real life.

When it comes to another issue for circus, in Turkey, from past to today many people like to go to the circus. The circus happens in special time of year and people wait patiently this time to entertain with families. Especially, when the time closes, government provide easy transportation for the circus ring. Also, papers and advertisements of the event of the circus are everywhere, for example huge advertisement paper on bus station is much more interesting.

Although people are interested in modern technology for many aspects, the circus is one of the oldest popular way of entertainment in life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'exotics'?
Suggestion: exotics
...hing of in there are alive, unusual and exotic. We always do not see clowns wear funny...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, i think, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90118577075 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73437809596 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7155891144 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120163957823 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537981460309 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374100095372 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799938640753 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217134648948 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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