The chart gives information on the means of transport used by overseas visitors to travel to New Zealand

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The chart gives information on the means of transport used by overseas visitors to travel to New Zealand

The chart gives information on the means of transport used by overseas visitors to travel to New Zealand

Nearly 70 percent of visitors travel around in New Zealand by car. The second and third most common ways of traveling in the country are by plane or coach. and just over 30 percent of visitors use each of these. By comparison, only 20 percent of visitors use trans. The least popular method of travel is boat, which six percent of travelers use.

Overall, the chart shows that although cars are the most popular means of transport, more people use public transport than private transport.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t used by overseas visitors to travel to New Zealand Nearly 70 percent of vi...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...g in the country are by plane or coach. and just over 30 percent of visitors use ea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 502.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 196.424390244 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87378640777 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38305514694 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 106.607317073 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 146.7 283.868780488 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4987789824 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.590153079053 0.215688989381 274% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248966779756 0.103423049105 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.24792171739 0.0843802449381 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.503498701069 0.15604864568 323% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.351185342701 0.0819641961636 428% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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