The chart shows the information relating to people within lS-minute drive service
in a particular region in UK. It also compares the peopre riving in urban areas and
people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the
information given below.
The bar graph illustrates the data about people in 15 minutes driving in a specific reason in United Kingdom, and also in this graph compared to native of urban areas and native of rural areas.
Overall it can be seen that all citizens of cities reach their every destination within 15 minutes by drive service. Where as some people of village not reach post office and primary school in 15 minutes driving.
Looking at the bar graph in more detail,it is evident that the amount of urban areas citizen who reach 100% secondary school within 15 minutes drive, as well as rural areas citizen also reach. However people of cities 100% reach to primary school in 15 minutes through drive but people of village areas only 65% get Primary School in the 15 minutes driving.
Turning to the remaining two data sets, all citizen of Metropolitan Area easily reach post office only in 15 minutes service of drive, in contrast 95% frontiers people reach post office in 15 minutes drive. For doctor reason, both people countryside and metropolis are rich in 15 minutes by driving.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...The bar graph illustrates the data about people in 15 minutes driving in a specif...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that all citizens of cities reach their every destination within 15 minutes by d...
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Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...ion within 15 minutes by drive service. Where as some people of village not reach post o...
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Suggestion: , it
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...,it is evident that the amount of urban areas citizen who reach 100% secondary school...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...thin 15 minutes drive, as well as rural areas citizen also reach. However people of c...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...well as rural areas citizen also reach. However people of cities 100% reach to primary ...
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Suggestion:
...ice only in 15 minutes service of drive, in contrast 95% frontiers people reach p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, well, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82162162162 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2780433212 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508108108108 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6785574668 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243873292683 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136646142614 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456499260766 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172581584833 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447605480264 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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