Movies with spectacular car chases are a thrill to watch and fun too but they have led to an increase in car accidents on urban roads. Do you agree or disagree with the views. What do you think can be done to make the youth more aware of road safety.
In this epoch of materialism and competition, movies play a vital role in every youngsters life. Movies that sensor reckless driving has become a fashion these days. Albeit,movies create impulsive actions to watch ,however the dangerous scene in the film develops an impact in the mind which can result in accidental. In my perception I too agree with this statement since teenagers imitate the actions shown by the actor as well as the adolescent want to gain fame in the society. Nevertheless, through proper channelization of awareness campaign and government support youths can be educated about the safety measures.
To begin with, youngsters are movie euthusiatist which drives them to emulate the actor in the film. To elaborate, when the youths try to follow the steps of the film star they feel that they are accepting a great challenge and it builds a competitive feeling with other youth. Apart form that,it also bring a peace of mind to the teenagers when they do audacious driving since they want to shine in their fame and get appreciation from their loved ones. Hence,they have a spirit of competition and always like to defeat other drivers on the road which ultimately rise casualties on road.
There are numerous factors to curb this issues,such as strict rule by the government and the police authorities can bring a drastic change in the rash driving. Furthermore, a penalty should be imposed on the one who exceed the limit and the licence should be abolished. Another solution could be awareness campaign will should be organised in universities and colleges of the safety rule of driving to the young drivers and their parents. Guardians play an indispensable role in monitoring the activities of their offsprings and need to offer counselling when needed.
To sum up,life can never be returned once lost. Therefore youth must enjoy the driving through proper safety measures which will enable them to enjoy the present and future.
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- Movies with spectacular car chases are a thrill to watch and fun too but they have led to an increase in car accidents on urban roads Do you agree or disagree with the views What do you think can be done to make the youth more aware of road safety 47
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0866873065 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76834896692 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7427550075 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201787434753 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592122427029 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312089100999 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107292724623 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426546258525 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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