do you agree or disagree?
Young people are less engaged in community services nowadays.
Helping the community to improve is everyone's responsibility. Although some people believe that young people do give time to help their communities, I think that they are not engaging enough in the community work and community-based activities. My argumentations are as follows.
To begin with, most of the young people grow with the ideology" enjoy life as long as you are young". This ideology makes them too busy with the life joys. Some play video games and some start other activities like sports etc. For example, once our teacher asked one my friends that what is your purpose in the future and he answered that he wanted to be a gamer. That is why I agree with the statement.
Secondly, Teenagers and young people do not have motivators. This means that there is no body to tell them that they should work for their community. All families nowadays became self-oriented and just want their children to be a successful and rich person. They teach their children the way of making money not the way of serving the country and the community. This is the problem and this is the reason why youngsters do not have time for their community.
Third, in some places, when children grow up, they start to think of making family and career. This makes them so busy and takes a lot of their time. Making money, working for success in life and career, finding a good husband or wife all are hard works and time-consuming processes that prevent young people from thinking about their community and their responsibilities towards it.
In conclusion, teenagers and youngsters do not participate to help their communities nowadays. For the reasons mentioned before, this is a fact in my opinion. People should change their perspectives about life. If we change ourselves, our younger generations will also change. we should shift from this self-oriented perspective to community-oriented perspective in order to have a good and desirable community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04615384615 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94616951191 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5065337433 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0952380952 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18882457112 0.272083759551 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560783346312 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750938061387 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114611358783 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681273329883 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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