Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Searches and statistics reveal that Earth population is growing extremely year by year which visibly show the need for more resources and more apparatus. I personally believe that as human population is increasing, there will be more need for cars in twenty years. Following reasons fully demonstrates why I think this way.
First of all, increased population demand more and more jobs which this boost the need for more cars carrying stuff from home to work. All people who have careers feel extremely demanding cars to use for various purposes including getting work place from home, traveling, shopping and many other chores. As an example, my father was not obliged to buy a car when he worked near our home in a shop, but when he was hired in a company far distant from our home, he felt that he must buy a car. Now beside ridding his car from home to his work and vice versa, he uses his car for going picnic, purchasing good for home and other routine works. This example show using a car to get work place from home.
Secondly, children after twenty years get older and require cars for visiting their parents. Usually children when they become enough old they travel other cities and states for continuing their education, so this will boost the need for a car to occasionally visit their parents. Moreover, even some students who live with their parents may need cars for ridding to their schools or universities. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Although I lived with my parents in one apartment, but I felt to have a car when I entered to university because my university was far from my home and all my classmates had cars, so I needed to buy one car for my own use.
In the conclusion, I strongly believe that there will be more numbers of cars in use after twenty years than there are today. I think this way because number and distance of jobs will boost the need for cars and because children get enough old after twenty years, and they need a car to regularly visit their parents and use for getting university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, even so, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60928961749 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40258409711 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483606557377 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.249628775 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184293172391 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873184711186 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724851295548 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136930906032 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541006500975 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.