Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both and give your opinion base on your experience.
It is universally admitted that the proliferation of technology has modernized people’s life considerably, especially in recording information. While some people concur that it is not essential for people to learn handwriting, others argue that it is an immensely conducive skill. In this essay, I will discuss both these perspectives and propose my standpoint.
To commence with, there is no denying that people nowadays can utilize cutting-edge gadgets to record information rather than handwriting. Actually, technological devices enable people to text and edit documents far more effectively and faster than writings which require abundant of time for production and correction. Moreover, it takes people a long period of time to acquire legible handwriting. For example, primary students have to practice writing some hours on a daily basis to obtain readable handwriting which is both time-consuming and challenging. As a result, people recently refuse to cultivate their writing skill and have an inclination to use modern gadgets instead.
On the other hand, some people opine that handwriting is a paramount important skill due to its significant merits. Firstly, it enhances people’s patience gradually. It is widely accepted that calligraphy is an elaborate skill which require enormous inspiration and effort to master. Thus, handwriting learners have a precious opportunity to boost their perseverance and tenacity while pursuing their interest. Furthermore, it prevents people from some illness related to the constant usage of technological appliances. According to scientists, spending a large number of hours working with devices results in some chronic health problems such as eye strain and short-sightedness which can be avoidable when writing.
In short, it is an emerging trend that people these day tend to utilize innovative devices to record information than writing. However, personally speaking, handwriting is a worth skill to acquires for its aforementioned positive points.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to handwrite'.
Suggestion: to handwrite
...it is not essential for people to learn handwriting, others argue that it is an immensely c...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople to text and edit documents far more effectively and faster than writings whi...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uire abundant of time for production and correction. Moreover, it takes people a ...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ction. Moreover, it takes people a long period of time to acquire legible handwriting. For exa...
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Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nces. According to scientists, spending a large number of hours working with devices results in s...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s which can be avoidable when writing. In short, it is an emerging trend that p...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in short, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79530201342 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21958312648 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7350821148 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265825281065 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855443326721 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060206556509 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168659133793 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339209227703 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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