with the help of internet & television many people are becoming famous. Is this a positive or negative trend? Include examples
new technologies are emerging each day. With the advancement in technologies, there is a change in the way people live. internet and television are among the few technologies, which has changed people life. By using platforms such as internet and technologies, more and more people are becoming well-known. In this essay, we will discuss how this is becoming a positive trend.
In yester days, only a few people had televisions at their homes as they were quite costly, which made them unaffordable. As technology is growing at a faster rate, almost everybody has access to television. Since television is easily accessible which directly increases the frequency of watching it. The content shown on television is suitable for each age group and a huge variety is available. For instance, adults are keener to know about what is happening in the world and they can get daily updates on the news channel, which are available available " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">24X7 in different languages. Mobile phone with internet gives access to infinite content on websites and applications.
television and internet cater to larger audiences, and most of the people showcase their talent through these platforms, which otherwise was dying. applications and websites such as Netflix, amazon prime, Hotstar to mention few, are having high turn over the number of subscriptions are rapidly increasing. students can use the internet to learn new subjects, languages, and things which they find interesting. The content available is from beginner to advance level. The people who teach well become popular and more students watch their videos.
While technology is getting more advance, people are utilizing these technologies to become famous. this is a positive trend as people are becoming more efficient, self-sufficient and more aware about the day-to-day needs of the world.
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- with the help of internet television many people are becoming famous Is this a positive or negative trend Include examples 86
- Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go.Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:• Say why you would like to go• Suggest what 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45484949833 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09774111971 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588628762542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0550314438 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6111111111 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257487248389 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079835842453 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696660490184 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169599933602 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836430474551 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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